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So have I improved????I need some comments!!!I liked it a lot :D But the background had too much heart shapes......oh well,I love it how the way it look liked :D

Dont forget,please :iconfavplz: and :iconcommentplz:

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Critiques


:iconfiveonthe:
Your colouring? Great! :thumbsup:

It's better than before. (:

When your thumbnail showed up in the message center, I was like wow, who's is that?. 5 :star: on Impact because it caught my attention. :D

Your stressing out about background, but there's nothing to worry about. There's only a few flaws, at first sight, the background doesn't even matter, but when you stare at it for a longer time, it starts to bug you. D:
Maybe you should've not made the blue :heart:s, but other than that, I think it's fine.

Your colouring has improved, I'll tell you that. It's the background that captures my attention though. When you colour, you should make more impact and show on the character, not the background. (You were aiming for hitting eye-on spot on the character, right?)

I know you can make some flashy colours and everything on the clothes, more shinier hair maybe, and darker shades. The eyes are spot on, they're great - and lastly, give the hair more like... BAM! you know? :XD:

It's great, I love this picu :icondweebdanceplz:, and that's all I'm gonna say. ^^;
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:iconfineartsbaby:
The background seems a bit busy for me, but I do like your colour choices. The shading seems a bit simple, and actually seems lacking on the face, but I particularly love how you did her hair.

Good piece overall - keep working on the colouring projects. Personally, I try to incorporate realistic shadows in colours, even if it is an anime style sketch or so on - but, regardless, anime linearts really do demand the "manga style" of shading (i.e., a significant difference in tones between highlights, mid tones, and shadows) or a more drastic style of natural shadows. Thinking about pieces you see that are classic anime styles, they either completely lack shadow (and thus seem very flat) or have very noticeable changes in tone.

As I said, great work - and never stop practicing and learning. :)
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:iconvolatilefortune:
Awwwww
love the vibrant colors!
and very cute expression!

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In Sowjet Russia, signature reads YOU!!


watch me dance: [link] OwO
:iconlydia-avolon20:
OMG...I just submit this *looks at watch* not even 20 seconds ago.

Thanks anyway :D

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I :heart: Sora forever!!!:love:
Sora :heart: Kairi forever!!!!!

Im a Kingdom Hearts Fan!!!!>:3

Wanna see Kairi and Sora had sex?click here! [link]

avatar by ~Miayah
:iconvolatilefortune:
nP :3

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In Sowjet Russia, signature reads YOU!!


watch me dance: [link] OwO
:iconlydia-avolon20:
whoa.....you replied me fast too XDDDD are you like this all the time? I bet it must be fun to reply and comment fast XDDD

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I :heart: Sora forever!!!:love:
Sora :heart: Kairi forever!!!!!

Im a Kingdom Hearts Fan!!!!>:3

Wanna see Kairi and Sora had sex?click here! [link]

avatar by ~Miayah
:iconvolatilefortune:
oh yes ^-^its a lot of fun and refreshing :D

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In Sowjet Russia, signature reads YOU!!


watch me dance: [link] OwO
:iconlydia-avolon20:
cool!maybe I should so that!But Im always late though...;_;

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I :heart: Sora forever!!!:love:
Sora :heart: Kairi forever!!!!!

Im a Kingdom Hearts Fan!!!!>:3

Wanna see Kairi and Sora had sex?click here! [link]

avatar by ~Miayah
:iconeva-rocha:
OMGGG :heart: __________ :heart:
We have to do a collab sometime!
Because me and photoshop don't get along at all -___-

Really good :glomp: :heart:

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My page is your page, please make yourself at home :cuddle:
:iconvolatilefortune:
^^

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In Sowjet Russia, signature reads YOU!!


watch me dance: [link] OwO
:iconnami2:
omg! its so pretty! =D i wish i could do that!!! lol awsome!

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Make me immortal with a kiss

Nami x Sora
:iconkimpossible24:
one word...
:jawdrop:
AMAZING!!!!

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:damphyr: Lucii

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